WHY THIS ONE WORKS
Sleep removes the reader’s ability to verify what happened, which lets one physical detail carry the entire turn.
It follows the house rule: exactly two sentences, with the turn doing more than adding a monster. It changes the reader’s interpretation of the setup.
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